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I sense you lingering...
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I sense you lingering... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I sense you lingering at my woken thoughts Smiling with ease while browsing in my windows I know you’re there Waiting for a glimpse of the ‘me’ you think I am Watching to see if I will say your name Perhaps not once but more Looking for something I can give you To carry you through your day Peruse a little longer if you will The sun is shining and a new year has begun Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a lovely invitation, dear Roniece. If you let him peruse a little longer, he might come to know the real you and love you for who you are ... you are a bright shining star, sweet friend. Love and Happy New Year hugs from Italy. Margherita   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Margherita! and you are in Italy?? I sooo love Italy along with Paris of course! Happy New Year my dear friend love RDB James... I so love you reading my words.. thank you .. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B, enjoyable view here...perhaps a dancer at her dawnscape.. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine thought to hold on to!: "The sun is shining and a new year has begun(!)" ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous writing! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark, Bruce and Dixie ... thank you so much for your comments.. I love that you take the time to read my work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
This is haunting and beautiful...Love it! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Wow...Ronie you know I looked for that window...lol you probably live on a second story, you do know aliens are watching..? sweet, very sweet dale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi there....what a good feeling this brings...thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful lines, a wonderful ending and a new beginning before us....tks much Roniece. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you each for your lovely comments, they warm my heart... oh and Dale, my bedroom is on the second level!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
RD-B You are beautiful and your poetry merely reflects that beauty inside you. I love this. A |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 what a delightful read! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Here is a fine and hopeful poem..just what poems should do..bring hope, love and inner beauty and this ticks all those boxes..thank you very much .. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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