Open Poetry #41 |
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Hunger! (And Happy New Year to you all) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
It’s easy so they say just knead a lump of dough, place it in a set abode fired up internally and it will rise and rise to satisfy desire. And I knead and heat until done but no one lives on bread alone so I look around in vain for the new and tasty bits to savour on my tongue. Nothing, nothing good, to adorn the staff of life here where the old are old and people do not play. So then of hunger it remains until another shopping free unearths the good and worthwhile from the millions way out there but no one shops around when the once found and known has dropped right off the shelves. Is it hunger or a gnawing rat, a lion on the prowl, or a woman simply needing and needing, needing, you? Helen / 31 December 2007 [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (01-01-2008 02:45 AM).] |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful poem Happy New year to you too and nice to see your picture. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And I kneed and heat until done but no one lives on bread alone" Well, Helen, I guess at least we have some bread. Love the analogy. And yes, it would be nice to have more than bread. But if you keep on kneading that dough, I think it will turn into something very light and lovely! Happy New Year to you, dear friend, and I hope 2008 brings you a feast! ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you TomM. Happy New Year to you too and thanks for the read. Much appreciated. Jo - Happy New Year to you too. I am regarding 8 as a lucky number. May you too have a feast on whatever takes your fancy. ![]() Love and hugs Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A great poem, dear Helen! And I am sure that 2008 will bring something spicy to be savored with the bread. May everybody's hunger for love be satiated throughout the world ... And may your wishes fulfill in the way you desire, dear beautiful Helen! Happy New Year. 8 ... the infinite ... I love it too. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nice to see you Helen~~ Wishing you much health and happiness in this coming year. M |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Helen, you always manage to ask thought-provoking questions. Always a pleasure to read. Happy New Year and beyond. *s |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Margherita, Maureen, and Chanson. I can't believe we are already into 2008. Here's wishing good things for us all and perhaps most importantly the wisdom to recognize the good things. ![]() Helen |
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