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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-12-30 10:27 AM

Thoughts slip through time
drifting on currents of
yesterdays emotions
forsaken by the fragile heart
that once held precious moments
close

while struggling to maintain
a smile so glad
throughout pain and tears

too often sad;

the memories float by on breeze
a wish made for just
one touch of a peace
known so long ago

now hidden among
distant shadows
of moon and stars

and unseen dreams.

Oh sweet tranquility
return to me,
break through the darkness
of silent skies

allow again, the light to shine
through emerald eyes

for just one treasured moment
of simple grace
here within this peaceful place
'neath the silver of harvest moon
I ask of thee,

grant this spirit
serenity.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-12-30 10:47 AM

so mote it be.

Happy New Year gentle one.

sarahsong7
Junior Member

since 2007-12-14

Posts 14

2 posted 2007-12-30 11:06 AM

Very nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-12-30 12:05 PM

beautiful writing for my morning

may your wish be granted

Happy New Year Donna

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2007-12-30 01:24 PM

a timely moment
happy new year

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-12-30 02:06 PM

stunning write....beautifully articulated....

loved the first paragraph...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2007-12-30 09:37 PM

in seven years
I've seen you grow
a practiced voice
that truly knows
a treasured presence
this, you be
a treasured daughter
gentle spirit, thee...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2007-12-30 10:42 PM

What a beautiful tribute, Sunshine, and so well deserved. Wonderful, deep and touching write, Donna.
Ida

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

8 posted 2008-01-01 11:27 PM

beautiful thats all I can say

BugBuggy

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2008-01-02 10:00 AM

This is a beautiful prayer, Gentle Spirit.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2008-01-02 12:11 PM

nice read

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

11 posted 2008-01-03 07:20 PM

This is going into my library! It's such a soothing lullaby.

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2008-01-03 07:39 PM

Donna...the tapestry of words you mix so well with heart, that I am left feeling like I should whisper....awwwww.

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