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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-12-29 01:55 AM

I can say I’m like a rose
in full freedom bloom
scenting all your senses
in nights of endless dreams
but because you can’t believe
I’ll simply say I’m “me”.

I can say you’re the feel in me
spiralling and circling
like a chill right up my spine
but because you can’t believe
I’ll simply say you’re “you”.

I can say I’m the one who feels
you're the one who made it be
but because you can’t believe
there is no you and me...
on earth where the roses bloom
and chills remain a need.

Helen / 29 December 2007

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-12-29 02:15 AM

Helen,

This is wonderful! I love this poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-12-29 06:10 AM

Wow, dear Helen, I am in awe of your words. Simply wonderful poem.

... though I am sorry that you think that chills remain a need!

Thank you for sharing your picture with us!!! I receive your beautiful smile and it does feel sweet like honey and warms my heart.

Perfect.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-12-29 06:14 AM

Thanks so much for the read, Alison. It's a "love poem" so I'm glad you love it.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-12-29 06:19 AM

Hi Margherita - I'm not worried. Every need will be fulfilled. I just do not know when. Thank you for your kind words and the picture is by the good graces and expertise of Marge.

Happy New Year!

Helen

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-12-29 12:13 PM

AhSweetHoneyBunches~
Love your thoughts in this penning~

Yeppers, it is GOOD to see your lovely smile AND to be able to access your web site~

May the New Year bring all good things your way~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-29 12:15 PM

Very much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2007-12-29 02:27 PM

Thank you, Marge! May 2008 be a wonderful year for you too. A little hiccup in the beginning leaves the way clear for the future.

Hugs
Helen

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2007-12-29 02:28 PM

Thanks Arctic Wind! I appreciate you stopping by for a read.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-12-30 08:01 PM

well, well, well, it is so nice to finally see the beautiful woman behind those incredible words....

Hello Helen....

this was a real struggle, for you to write, I could feel your heart aching for what isn't....

Hugs to you my friend, may 2008 bless you with much love....

Lee J.

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