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fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
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0 posted 2007-12-28 04:43 PM


Take my hand in yours and let us laugh again
Look into my eyes and smile at me with your angelic face
Caress my cheek like so many times you have done
Kiss me, love me, and hold me again.
But please don’t hold my hand to say good-bye
Don’t look into my swollen crying eyes that have left a mark on my face
Don’t kiss me, love me, and hold me without doing it again
You are my life line like the wind is to trees
You are the glue that holds me together
Please my darling Take my hand and do not part
For I will no longer be sane if you depart
God is waiting but so am I
He will understand but I will crumble and fall
Breathe in the winds of life
Breathe out the journey of another life
Take my hand, please take my hand
Take me to your sunset to your tranquil place
For I will not live much longer without your embrace
Looking now in the eyes of despair I realized how hard to reach for your last gasp of air
As I see you struggling to once again please me
I swallow hard, close my eyes and comfort you with a loving farewell
I reach out and gently caress and take your hand.


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-12-28 07:33 PM


I can feel your sadness in your words..it's always hard to say goodbye to those you love... you have expressed this well.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-12-30 03:10 AM


Nice writing...James
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