Open Poetry #41 |
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Late December |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. A misty snow Is falling slowly Through gray air Last night When everyone else Was sleeping I stood in the dark yard From far out in the forest Or perhaps time there came A single call Only once My name And then it faded— I miss you too . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
beautiful! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful indeed!!!!! Wonderful person is truly always missed, deeply too. ![]() |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
This is quite lovely in it's meloncholia ![]() |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
So descriptive and very, very poignant, Thanks Pete. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. fine! applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Poignant write. Enjoyed. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching piece |
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