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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2007-12-28 10:46 AM


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A misty snow
Is falling slowly
Through gray air

Last night
When everyone else
Was sleeping
I stood in the dark yard

From far out in the forest
Or perhaps time there came
A single call

Only once
My name
And then it faded—

I miss you too


.

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-28 10:49 AM


beautiful!


TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-12-28 04:32 PM


Beautiful indeed!!!!!
Wonderful person is truly always missed, deeply too.

Irish
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since 2006-05-02
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Ft Benning
3 posted 2007-12-28 04:34 PM


This is quite lovely in it's meloncholia  
Just another Pete
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since 2007-12-06
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Scotland
4 posted 2007-12-28 05:04 PM


So descriptive and very, very poignant, Thanks Pete.
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-12-28 05:21 PM


v. fine!

applause!!

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2007-12-31 12:14 PM


Poignant write. Enjoyed.
                   Ida

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2007-12-31 10:17 AM


touching piece
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