Open Poetry #41 |
I Loved You Once |
roseofwinter Junior Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 12 |
It seems like just yesterday that I saw your smile, and was filled with happiness. All the laughing, hugging, and the promise of a great future. But years have gone by and we are worlds apart, left with memories of what could have been. All the what if's, the dreams. Life went on and we both grew into different people, and different lives. Yet the memories of you still linger, tucked away in my mind. I tried to go back there once, as did you. And for a brief moment in time we were 10 again, playing in the school yard. Only to realize the next day that time had passed, and our feelings were just memories. No regrets and no tears, just a beautiful memory of a time long gone. Of a love once shared....... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice write... enjoy the festive times |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Some things are better kept as memories. But don't ever lose them. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
these beautiful memories you shared with us Roseofwinter and I thank you for that.. be well RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseOfWinter~ Oh ... such a lovely, lovely penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Enjoyed your memories, thanks for sharing! Brought back a few of my own.. ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beatuful memories to savor for the rest of your days.... they are what gives a person hope, because we knew love.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate well beautiful writing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's good to cherish such beautiful memories without clinging to them. Beautiful, wise words. Love and Happy New Year! Margherita |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
memories of love never leave us..your poem touched my heart and my soul as we all have those feelings of "What if" thank you for sharing BugBuggy |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. Memories are a beautiful part of who we are...... |
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