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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2007-12-27 03:35 AM


snowy seat for a sit
slid onto a bar
finding a place of rest
between a swing rung
from one station
to repeated
holiday rides
down convenient slides
in dusty saddles
or grace planked benches
fanfare carved
bleacher starved...
flop on the seat
bean bag and peat...
glimpse through a window
an ottoman view
with many words
oh where to rest
weary rears
so many seats to sit on
and not a moment
to stand

© Copyright 2007 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-12-27 05:07 PM


not sure I get the whole picture but...
"so many seats to sit on
and not a moment
to stand " this made me smile~~

nice to see you again, Martin

M

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-29 12:13 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Irish
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since 2006-05-02
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Ft Benning
3 posted 2007-12-29 01:49 PM


This made me smile  
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
4 posted 2007-12-30 09:40 AM


oops.. I needed to space the piece before flop on the seat...thanks all


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