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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2007-12-27 01:34 AM


It’s clear to me that love’s not near
in these murky depths of life
but it moves sometimes within the sphere
of where I’ve yet to go.

There’s a chair and table, bed, besides
the all pervading mind  
and a stream of running feelings
that trickles wide and to the side
of what once was not allowed.

It’s a place where lovers congregate
and I know I’ll search the minds
looking left, right, centre, back,  
for the love you feel inside.

And I’ll walk and walk the many miles
to maybe find you missed the turn
and stepped into a mire
forever there embedded
in complete denial.  

Today I shrug, tut-tut, tut-tut,
but in the sphere where all is clear
more than one will mourn a death
that never brought re-birth.

Such are stories; no one knows
where the now unloving go!


Helen / 27 December 2007 www.dreamtimepoetry.com

[This message has been edited by Honeybunch (12-27-2007 07:45 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-12-27 01:53 PM


OhHelen~

How I do love this line of thought -

'a stream of running feelings
that trickles wide and to the side'


Beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

**Be sure and check your email**

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Honeybunch
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2 posted 2007-12-27 02:00 PM


Marge - thank you so very much for your comment and the mail.  I do really appreciate your kindness and will get back to you as soon as my work load begins to lessen.  Thanks again, Marge.

Helen

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2007-12-28 08:55 AM


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2007-12-28 10:45 AM


Such are stories; no one knows
where the now unloving go!


~~sighing~~

M

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-12-30 08:29 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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