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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2007-12-25 04:26 PM




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moaning out your love

not seeing past the moment

you missed the future


©2007 by icebox

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© Copyright 2007 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-12-25 04:53 PM


Ironically, there is no future...
just the past and present...endlessly.

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2007-12-25 06:34 PM


the past is a country in which we no longer live; the future is music as yet unplayed.




Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2007-12-26 06:27 AM


yet, there is truth in this ...
when we cry in the here and now over past experiences, the Now of tomorrow .. so to say .. will never get a chance to change.

Life flows placidly
we have the choice to be free
to cry or to laugh


it fits I think, I have it impressed on my mousepad (my winning haiku on poetry.com ...).

Love and Joy!
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-12-26 07:22 AM


the past is a country in which we no longer live; the future is music as yet unplayed.


so true...I just wish tomorrow and today not to be blue tunes

M

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2007-12-26 12:40 PM


this is truth...I know.

*kiss*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Irish
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Ft Benning
6 posted 2007-12-28 04:32 PM



I actually found this a bit funny . ( not the content darlin )

I was going to say why but the thingie won't let me

vandana
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7 posted 2007-12-28 05:43 PM


enjoyed
Just another Pete
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Scotland
8 posted 2007-12-28 06:10 PM


Aha! But... By the time the future gets to us it's already the past. In the room of the present there is space only for one.

Very provocative and fun.
Thanks muchly
Pete

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