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...let it snow..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Let it snow, she said and gently shook the glass…. I watched then as softness fell in hush quilting thoughts and chilling searing aches to a restrained burn mountains tower, eternally stoic a miserable reminder of time and distance ~ still the sound of breaking waves and song of gulls remain undiminished in her heart for now….for now so be it….. let it snow… ~SEA~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful, soft and can't help Merry Christmas to you!!!! Sea.  Tomtoo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine images (photo. and poetic)... effective 'write!'... I am particularly fond of: "...the sound of breaking waves and song of gulls remain undiminished in her heart(!)" serious applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a gorgeous write! "as softness fell in hush quilting thoughts and chilling searing aches to a restrained burn" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely captivating, dear SEA! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Luscious...brings snow to the imagination...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous indeed so close to home  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you shall remember the sights and sounds of the sea it is in your blood Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, captivating write. I just love how you've worded this, and have enjoyed reading it so many times. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
gorgeous and captivating indeed! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you, each of you very much for the reads and nice replies!  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i really enjoyed this poem ARCTIC WIND |
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james.bowie Junior Member
since 2007-12-29
Posts 14bangor, Maine |
I agree this is pretty, Unless you are trapped in bangor Maine, Snow needs to go- but really I always found you spirit to be uplifting- sorry for my abscence. james A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
This is very charming sweety |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
it is snowing thusly...here...now (on this wintry-fine evening!) continuing applause!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
until another day, the right day...comes, yes...let it snow. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What are you doing with my leg in that picture!?  Enjoyed this, little one!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Very beautiful just like you Susan! I hope you and yours had a very Merry Christmas! Wishing you a wonderful New Year full of happiness and love! Take care and I'll be in touch soon. Amy "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh this is luscious! Happy New Year Susan - love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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