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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-12-24 06:38 PM


Things of perfect beauty

A desert rose blooming
  unwitnessed

A remarkable moon
on a deep-overcast
  night

A snowfall in the
pathless wilderness

the goddess in the
window of a passing
   train

memories of the
first bright sting
  of love

That love song dreamed
  but never written

the comprehensive
ocean of all that we
shall never ‘know’

Christmas at
age seven

Happy Christmas to all in "P.I.P.-land" and beyond!


© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-12-24 06:48 PM


"That love song dreamed
  but never written"
~sigh~ "And I love You So" is my alltime favorite, and of course, the Righteous Brothers "Unchained Melody" is superb.
Try as I might, I've never succeeded in putting the core of my heart into lyrics.
Another Zenfully delicious write, poet Bruce.

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-12-24 07:27 PM


Dear Sir,
perfect beauty.  beyond humans' reach. But true  beauty.
love this one.
Tomtoo

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-12-24 07:52 PM


Merry Christmas Bruce.
This one is a gem.

aziza
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4 posted 2007-12-24 09:29 PM


Bruce,

I send you a very heartfelt wish for you to have a beautiful Christmas.  I have enjoyed your poetry this last year - thank you for gifting us with the beauty in your heart and the beauty you share.  

Thinking of you on this Christmas eve,
Alison

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2007-12-25 04:38 AM


This one is a thing of perfect beauty, Bruce.
                              Ida

ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2007-12-25 01:41 PM


Ida posts my thoughts as well. This write is perfect, bringing tears to my eyes this day. Wishing you and those close to you a peaceful Christmas.
Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
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Kingdom Hearts
7 posted 2007-12-25 01:58 PM


Wonderful from the very first word and along to the very end. Simply amazing

Thank you!

Tears of Sanity~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-12-25 08:57 PM


And a heart to appreciate these things of perfect beauty...James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2007-12-26 07:02 PM


~ clear skies after a devastating storm...

Loved your poetic pieces of perfection!

I trust that your Christmas was a merry one!

~ and may 2008 bring you bounty, inner peace, and joy!

Linda

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