Open Poetry #41 |
Perfect Beauty |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Things of perfect beauty A desert rose blooming unwitnessed A remarkable moon on a deep-overcast night A snowfall in the pathless wilderness the goddess in the window of a passing train memories of the first bright sting of love That love song dreamed but never written the comprehensive ocean of all that we shall never ‘know’ Christmas at age seven Happy Christmas to all in "P.I.P.-land" and beyond! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"That love song dreamed but never written" ~sigh~ "And I love You So" is my alltime favorite, and of course, the Righteous Brothers "Unchained Melody" is superb. Try as I might, I've never succeeded in putting the core of my heart into lyrics. Another Zenfully delicious write, poet Bruce. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Dear Sir, perfect beauty. beyond humans' reach. But true beauty. love this one. Tomtoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Merry Christmas Bruce. This one is a gem. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bruce, I send you a very heartfelt wish for you to have a beautiful Christmas. I have enjoyed your poetry this last year - thank you for gifting us with the beauty in your heart and the beauty you share. Thinking of you on this Christmas eve, Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This one is a thing of perfect beauty, Bruce. Ida |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Ida posts my thoughts as well. This write is perfect, bringing tears to my eyes this day. Wishing you and those close to you a peaceful Christmas. |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Wonderful from the very first word and along to the very end. Simply amazing Thank you! Tears of Sanity~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And a heart to appreciate these things of perfect beauty...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ clear skies after a devastating storm... Loved your poetic pieces of perfection! I trust that your Christmas was a merry one! ~ and may 2008 bring you bounty, inner peace, and joy! Linda |
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