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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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highways are empty shoes upside down under the sky legless laying like sleeping dogs that have run too long but never found a master old iron still is loyal perhaps our blood is the same oil and metal, stone and water hard to find the seams if one goes fast enough there are windows like trees on both sides of my mind I move past them quicker now lest I recognize a lover or hater from another time or lest I am recognized as the shadow of a shadow something passing in the night that leaves fingerprints and the need for fingers that touch lips before the shhhhh ___________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It never fails that your words bring me home to 101... And sometimes, just the road of 1. Merry Christmas, D. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"highways are empty shoes upside down under the sky legless laying like sleeping dogs that have run too long but never found a master" ~ I find it curious that I have not ever regarded roads as such! lol Your mind sees beyond the mundane and obvious.  "or lest I am recognized as the shadow of a shadow something passing in the night that leaves fingerprints and the need for fingers that touch lips before the shhhhh" ~ and" ~ The closing lines ain't half bad, either!   EA  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
merry christmas  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
shhhhh! Just want this feeling of great poetry's caress to linger for a while ... Love and Merry Christmas, dear D! Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, excellent! This one is more accessible than many of yours, and just as full of image and meaning. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
and leave enough mystery to keep them wondering who you really were ~glider~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"or lest I am recognized as the shadow of a shadow something passing in the night that leaves fingerprints and the need for fingers" way too cool...as usual Merry Christmas D...  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It's hard to find the seams in river ice also if one races over it fast enough - sometimes sailing over open water, cold brushing the skin (if any is exposed), unrecognizable but so recognized. I felt this one. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...you do know those roads don't you babe...thanks lady!! ____________ ms ea, thank you for letting my words know your eyes today. _________________ ms vandana, thank you and you too. _______________ ms mar, humble thanks to you lady friend _______________ ms nan, thank you lady..sometimes I do leave the blinds up. ______________ wg, thank you glider ________________ ms suesea, thanks babe for the read and smile _____________ ms az, thanks for knowing the feeling little one...you did nail it and I am not surprised. |
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