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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2007-12-23 10:51 PM



If I could dream
and the dream were real
but I could not wake up
to notice
what had healed
pity I knew not
of secret seals
snow drift teals
and a bird's cry
escaped
into wintry breezes

If I could wake
from dreams so real
pinch myself
to notice
another season
after winter drifts
blow in
know why mortals
leave
only to return
their clocks seems to
stand still for a moment
happiness for few
linked to dials
and the faint recall
of a cry in the wind...


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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-12-24 11:55 AM


Ahhh, yes IF!

Very good piece!

Love,
Margherita

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Gaia
2 posted 2007-12-25 05:00 PM


"pinch myself
to notice
another season
after winter drifts
blow in"
The seasons seem to roll together haphazardly these days. May your winter be real, but not harsh.

wordwizard
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3 posted 2007-12-26 03:38 PM


Lots of snow and cold in Montreal. this year! Thanks for your best wishes


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