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Open Poetry #41
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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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0 posted 2007-12-23 04:06 PM

I’ve worked hard to be,
Yet there remains more to do,
More to see,
More sections of time,
More lines to rhyme.

Now is the time of pauses
Without causes or expressions,
Yet the work gone
Requirements done
Leave me with slight depression,
Missing you.

You went there,
I came here
And only I have is a phone
From home to home
And I can’t touch you
So without a caress
What can I do
But cry on hanging up
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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2007-12-23 04:53 PM

i just broke up with my gf a couple days ago.. i can relate with the feelings you are expressing here. nicely done
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-23 05:38 PM

MERRY CHRISTMAS!



ARCTIC WIND
DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240
3 posted 2007-12-23 06:21 PM

Well, Eagle, we didn't break up the school did snding her home and far from me.  After a kiss, a phone call just won't do.  Sorry for your loss, hope you find a new love soon.

Merry Christmas Windy
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