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Flipped New Member
since 2007-11-28
Posts 8 |
Had to censor part of the poem, so it might not sound right but yea..... Hope you like it, and the other poems i posted recently. I've seen an done some stuff That you wouldn't even attempt As if it was a taint Something that could make you faint It could make your insides boil Make your eyes glaze over an look like foil No this isn't about drugs It's about other things Life and failure Things you share together The stuff you deal with day to day The things you couldn't say So many things happen So many things that could flatten Ones pride and self-esteem An make it seem as if it was just a dream That in which everything was out to get you While you ran and wore down your shoes You attempt to make things better An only end up making things harder In the end things will sort out Not just flat out But slowly and surely they will Heh then you just might not need them pills After all it's what life is all about Dealing with your stuff then getting the hell out |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
absolutely right. Life is like this. Have a wonderful Christmas and some happy time. Tom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You did a very good job with this one. Sometimes a situation seems hopeless and yet life itself smoothes the edges and the sun comes out again. I do hope so for all those who struggle to find their place down here. Love, Margherita |
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