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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-12-21 01:37 PM


In Caress of A Hawaiian Sunset


Happiness is swimming in Hawaiian waters
and soaking up the warm Pacific Ocean.

Happiness is eating slices of fresh pineapple
smothered in the pleasure of whipped cream.

Happiness is standing atop the Pali Lookout
feeling the breeze while taking in the view.

Happiness is scuba diving reefs from Coco Marina
while sharing in the Suns sweet morning embrace.

And happiness is my sweetheart holding my hand
and kissing my lips in caress of a Hawaiian sunset.


JamesLee
21December
2007




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Xillus_Xavier
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1 posted 2007-12-21 03:01 PM


Well done....this is nicely penned.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-12-21 04:48 PM


Hawaii Man, those all would bring me lots of happiness to be sure! Mind you, I believe the gender of my "sweetheart" would not be of the fairer sex! lol

aloha hugs,

Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-22 07:00 AM


James... I think you do happiness very well my friend ... RDB
Merry Christmas gorgeous boy!  RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2007-12-22 10:27 AM


Love the title!

And have a very merry tropical Christmas LOL



ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
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5 posted 2007-12-22 10:38 AM


Excellent James, once again you nailed it...well done...

John

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6 posted 2007-12-22 01:38 PM


ohhh James, this is my favorite of yours ever (so far...      This is truly, wonderful.   

Happy holidays, dear James.

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7 posted 2007-12-22 01:53 PM


Well now you did it!  I have to check the prices to Hawaii in February.   Merry Christmas and Aloha!

             
Love, Joy, and Cheer!

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-12-22 02:19 PM


Thank you Xillus, Earth Angel, Roniece, Artic Wind, effjayel, Gentle Spirit and Mysteria for the wonderful responses...hope everyone has a Wonderful Christmas...James
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9 posted 2007-12-22 03:20 PM


You share happiness so beautifully.  Thank you, James.  You are a gift.

Merry Christmas.
Alison

PoetsPlay
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10 posted 2007-12-23 01:19 AM


Nice job!

Alexandra

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11 posted 2007-12-25 10:29 AM


a most pleasant 'slice of tropical life' write!

applause!!

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12 posted 2007-12-25 10:33 AM


A Happy Hawaiian Sunrise Hello to you!
A tasty pineapple morning treat!

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2007-12-25 08:39 PM


Thank you aziza, Poets Play, Secondhanddreampoet and Midnitesun for the wonderful responses...Merry Christmas
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