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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-21 06:45 AM



today will be special later
when we look back at the crumbs
and watch the birds sorting them
from the sun spaces and shadows

when our hands are sore
from harvesting want to things
from the hidden secrets
that are so hard to open sometimes

you will laugh with your eyes
at how I made predictions
just like you knew I would
when you opened the windows

so I could hear your breathing


__________

daark

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1 posted 2007-12-21 10:59 AM


"from the hidden secrets
that are so hard to open sometimes

you will laugh with your eyes
at how I made predictions
just like you knew I would
when you opened the windows

so I could hear your breathing"

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it's the effort you put into knowing those secrets....that makes them worth sharing...


Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2007-12-21 01:11 PM


you will laugh with your eyes
at how I made predictions
just like you knew I would
when you opened the windows

so I could hear your breathing

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It always helps to open the window sometimes, but sometimes it's hard to breath......

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-12-21 03:37 PM


ms suesea, thanks lady friend for the eyes on this one.

______________

ms angel, thank you for the look in too

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2007-12-21 05:41 PM


MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU!

    

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-12-21 06:14 PM


thanks aw...and to you too
aziza
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6 posted 2007-12-21 11:06 PM


DS,

This is beautiful.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-12-22 06:44 AM


you will laugh with your eyes
at how I made predictions
just like you knew I would
when you opened the windows

so I could hear your breathing

yes Mr Daark... I like this and I am laughing with my eyes and timing your predictions!  
Merry Christmas my friend RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
8 posted 2007-12-22 08:00 AM


ms az, thank you special one

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ms R & B...am I that predictable?  Hope so, thanks lady and have a jolly holly too

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