navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Winter's Silence
Open Poetry #41
Post A Reply Post New Topic Winter's Silence Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
eternally_singing
Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
PA, United States

0 posted 2007-12-20 02:36 PM



Silence. The woods are quietly sleeping,
Caught in a frozen tableau.
Through the trees the wind is sweeping
Snow spun crystals like cobwebs grow.

Winter storms enwrap Mother Nature in a heavy spell,
Until Spring sings a song of joyous awakening.
Then icicles release their frigid form to flow to a river’s swell,
Towards the river the cool water is slowly snaking.

Come Spring to free your true love
So we, her subjects may all awake.
Until then the dove will stay beside your beloved
And the winter’s heavy silence it will not break.



© Copyright 2007 Caroline G. - All Rights Reserved
moondogz
Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397
Great White North
1 posted 2007-12-20 06:11 PM


very spiritual poem...love is all that is..thanks for sharing.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-12-20 06:11 PM


quote:
Silence. The woods are quietly sleeping,
Caught in a frozen tableau.



Exquisite!

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

Lincoln
Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62
Earth
3 posted 2007-12-20 06:17 PM


very nice, created a cool image, was enjoyed

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

eternally_singing
Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
PA, United States
4 posted 2007-12-20 06:51 PM


Thank you for the comments. I am glad that it was enjoyed.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-12-23 05:27 AM


Silky...James
Tears-of-Sanity
Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts
6 posted 2007-12-23 07:38 AM


This is a nice poem... very touching!
Thank you for sharing!

Tears of Sanity~

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Winter's Silence

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary