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Waiting For Dawn
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Waiting For Dawn |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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She is the loveliest vision that I've ever seen when she comes skipping around the bend all dressed up in her burnt sienna gown surrounded by golden gleams of light, and in the early morning breathe of yawn I hear her exhale as she releases her whisper of hope promised for the coming day; and I, am but left again to remain seemingly always waiting for Dawn. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, she is an elegant reminder to pause and listen, and thank. Lovely writing, as always, GS |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I was blessed to see the most beautiful sunrise this morning and I stopped to thank the Creator for the moment. Sometimes those moments are the only ones that we get in a day and I am truly always, looking for the next Dawn, for that next moment that makes it all seem right... thank you for peeking in. Have a very blessed Holiday. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I hear her exhale as she releases her whisper of hope promised for the coming day With such soft, captivating dawn whispers you get my full attention always. Truly delightful, dear Donna! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, may all your dawns come dancing in as "golden gleams" that Light-en up each of your days! Love & Light!  Linda  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
There's a world inside this... but I will not see Dawn till I reach that other shore. Outstanding dale |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely that you paint such beauty for eyes like mine to savor. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"and I, am but left again to remain seemingly always" this says it all for me, Donna Wishing you and April a wonderful and healthy holiday season M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Listening to the silence... you express it with such tenderness! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each my friends, for resting your eyes here for a moment and leaving such kind replies. Happy holidays to all!! |
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