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LeeJ
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0 posted 2007-12-17 06:56 PM


and so, where I stood one summer
love was a café waiter, who sold
nights for consumption…full moon
on the side
my yellow mop of hair, a comrade
humming Parisian sweaters
against humid skin
wanted to trade you tanned face
for a fairy tail laugh so contagious
clear eyes moved with large strides
hitherto
mere sweet, calm, recitals
discovering springs
of imagination
curiosity kissing whispering arms
around my lighted solitude
wandering air of innocence
life snuggled to my breast
incorrigible
were my prayers
that everyone knew this kind of
hierarchy
oh intimate friend
ancient rosy flesh
seeps a sphinx like smile
seductive
rich friend
holding red roses
against my hair
like is was the ornament of your
longing…elegant
gracious journal
my treasure of treasures
remarkable voice
of expression
love
come, tell me your thoughts
sit here close
whisper to me about
candles with echoes of light
instant and momentous
swelling of images and daylight
I am trembles of your desire
poignant incessant oceans
of some new opened door
where we played music
in the night
we are dyed in wool
blind with love
jovial hallucinations



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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-17 07:02 PM


discovering springs
of imagination
curiosity kissing whispering arms
around my lighted solitude
wandering air of innocence


LeeJ, you bring a rush of emotion with your incredibly fascinating poem!

Bravissima!!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-12-17 07:59 PM


Where the love might begin
but the want ever stays...

oh my friend...

you are feeding my muse!



So good to see everyone again,
but your poems
tune me




Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2007-12-18 01:06 AM


Lee,

Love lend such newness to life, in the expectancy, the trembles, vibrant touches and color.  You write it all in such heady detail that I could only smile remembering how colossal being in love is--one's being just floating between her heartbeat and his.  

I enjoyed reading this so much!  ~ Karen


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4 posted 2007-12-18 09:09 AM


"my treasure of treasures
remarkable voice
of expression
love
come, tell me your thoughts
sit here close
whisper to me about
candles with echoes of light"


this is perfection...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-12-18 10:34 AM


Lee~
With this-

'where I stood one summer
love was a café waiter, who sold
nights for consumption…full moon
on the side'


-you transported me back to a long ago memory place~

*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-12-18 11:31 AM


Oh, Lee, I was swept away by your dreamy imagination! Awww, yes! That is most assuredly what being in love is like!

"discovering springs
of imagination
curiosity kissing whispering arms
around my lighted solitude
wandering air of innocence
life snuggled to my breast"

Sighing, here...

Love to you, Ms Lovely!

Linda

vandana
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7 posted 2007-12-18 11:37 AM


GOOD READ
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2007-12-18 06:30 PM


You left me with goosebumps that time LeeJ...outstanding!

GG
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Lost in thought
9 posted 2007-12-19 07:36 AM


Can't say I've ever been in love, but you sure make it sound pretty good.

The pictures you pain and the feelings you bring about with your words always amaze me. Great write.

~alyssa

Hupomeno.

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