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Red Sheets |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Red sheets between soft skin can you feel me when I move away leaving the warmth to die out as the cold air takes it's place The difference between clouds and clear skies is a question of movement a question of love If I breathe in will your lungs swell If I sing will your ears burn If I speak will you listen If I move will you pull me close or let the cold air take my place as the distance expands |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief!! This rocks!! "If I breathe in will your lungs swell If I sing will your ears burn If I speak will you listen If I move will you pull me close or let the cold air take my place as the distance expands" I liked all of it so much, but this is amazing  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this a lot...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
exhale, this is just a wonderful write and one I read a few times, it has so much in it, intimate surroundings, love and need, very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing this. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
If I breathe in will your lungs swell If I sing will your ears burn If I speak will you listen If I move will you pull me close or let the cold air take my place as the distance expands oh my, how beautiful are these words! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chelsea... how lovely this is... a perfect reminder of like meeting kind.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I LOVE THIS! chel ARCTIC WIND |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh MYYYYYYY! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So nice I read it twice...and gave it another ride to the top...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am so glad you've come back to bless us with your poetry again. I really like this one Chelsea. Nicely done. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wow! fabulous writing! |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Being alone is something that each of us has to deal with and I am very fond of the way that you deal with it. Being detached even in a very personal moment seems to be so natural with the context that you put it in, even though to many it seems so unnatural. |
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