Open Poetry #41 |
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Waiting, waiting |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
Waiting, waiting, tap-tap-tap; love’s standing in a queue praying for disbursement of everybody’s needs but of prayer it goes a-wandering ahead to what will be and leaves this present lifetime simply how it’s meant to be. Then starts the squirm and shuffle that misaligns intent to stand a woman centred in a queue that never ends and so leans the will left and right for easier forbearance and tolerance. And in this time of wait and pray the heart slows down its pace in preparation for the move back into the gait of practicality. Finally, decidedly, love moves into the fray weighted down and laden with what it doesn’t need but in-between the packaging lies goodwill to everyone and love is better, stronger, for the next time around! Helen / 16 December 2007. www.dreamtimepoetry.com |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Honey- Very much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"but in-between the packaging lies goodwill to everyone and love is better, stronger, for the next time around!" ![]() yes! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
ahead to what will be and leaves this present lifetime simply how it’s meant to be. This is a very comforting thought indeed, dear Helen. We sometimes ask too much of ourselves too, so we need to calm down and to simply affirm that all is well ... but the Buddhist thought is not everybody's easy solution. Beautiful write! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Helen...it's so nice to read you again I've missed your outlooks |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You write such lovely words Helen That touch the heart. Take care Lindsay |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for reading and for commenting. May 2008 bring in the new and wonderful for all of you! |
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