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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2007-12-15 06:22 PM



         

Something's Coming

The dark clouds roll in
to the gray empty sky.
--Something is coming
from way up high.

As the storm brews up
and the wind stops,
the clouds form a funnel
that suddenly drops.

All that was enjoyed
is now completely gone.
But there comes a new day
at new breaking dawn.



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1 posted 2007-12-15 06:24 PM


eerie and the picture is too cool
Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2007-12-15 06:33 PM


For some reason "Something wicked this way comes" pops into my head.  Enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-15 07:25 PM


oh my Arctic... this is beautiful! We have had some storms our way too..but nothing as bad as the US..  stay safe.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

xXallhailabbyXx
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4 posted 2007-12-15 08:07 PM


Positively love it, and the images add so much to the effect.  A wonderous, strong, eerie and yet beautiful write.
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-12-15 08:37 PM


Sea-

Thank you sooooo  much!

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Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-12-15 08:37 PM


Cein-

Thank you!

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Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-12-15 08:38 PM


RDB-

Thank you!

Tornado clouds and funnels scare me how dark they can get

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Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-12-15 08:39 PM


X-

Welcome to pip!

And thank you!!!!!!!



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aziza
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9 posted 2007-12-15 09:07 PM


I didn't see the pictures when I first read your poem - and it stands very strong on its own.  The pictures are beautiful, but I like the poem with them or without.

A

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2007-12-15 09:11 PM


Aziza-

Thank you Friend!

Glad you enjoyed



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passing shadows
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11 posted 2007-12-15 11:53 PM


so gorgeous!
Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-12-15 11:57 PM


Passing Shadows-

Thank you!

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iliana
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13 posted 2007-12-16 12:10 PM


Very good -- and enjoyed the photos, too!
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14 posted 2007-12-16 12:16 PM


Iliana-

Thank you very much !

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Rick
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15 posted 2007-12-16 01:46 AM


How wonderful nature is my friend and the scenes she can give are amazing, thank you for your words and wonderful photos, enjoyed.

Rick

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2007-12-16 09:37 AM


Rick-

Your welcome!lol

And thank  you



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Margherita
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17 posted 2007-12-16 10:58 AM


Oh, dear Arctic Wind, this felt like being within the storm and then released into dawn's peace. Beautiful words and beautiful pictures!!

Love,
margherita

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18 posted 2007-12-16 11:15 AM


Margherita-

Thank you so much!

I am glad you enjoyed

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Earth Angel
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19 posted 2007-12-16 06:17 PM


A striking post, AW! Coming full circle ~ like most things in Nature ~ and in our lives!

Love & Nature's Light,

EA

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20 posted 2007-12-16 06:21 PM


EA-

Yes, it is very scary how nature describes her self! lol



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LindsayP
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21 posted 2007-12-16 08:27 PM



Arctic Wind you tell a very vivid story to match those beautiful pictures.

Thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

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22 posted 2008-02-04 10:06 PM


Lindsay!

Thank you!, I am Glad you Enjoyed !

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