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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 If I let loving you go to my head will my heart find out that you’re just no good for me if I let my heart go astray will my head fight with reason would my lust then commit treason? and would you, when I gave into desire be worth the cost ? what would I gain? …..what would our sins inspire….. and what then what would be lost? I simply can not afford you….. ~SEA~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
what we need and what we want is always confusing. I find it best when I'm confused is to walk away and ignore it  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now see? You answered your own question. Sometimes getting older can be a good thing when it comes to matters of the heart, and understanding the consequences of not listening to our head instead of our heart  and look the is back |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sighing...  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY! much enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I simply can not afford you….. now this is good... if only I could apply that simple logic to shoe buying... ! very much enjoyed your lovely poem SEA... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I was wondering... Could you reason yourself into something as well as you can talk yourself out of something..? best wishes dale |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed your words here Sea! Reasoning maybe can take a lot of joy out of living and maybe, just maybe, the heart actually can afford more than we think. What is a heard if it doesn't over extend itself? |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea, the heart and the mind work as one my friend and really we always know what is right for us and wrong. Sometimes bad just feels so good and is often remembered more; how strong our desire, how strong our heart, to what we can afford to chance. Enjoyed the read my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow awesome! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sometimes, that kind of 'love' ain't worth the price! "I simply can not afford you….." ~ Unfortunately, that isn't discovered until the emotional bank is on empty! Good to read your words again!  EA |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You sound like a very switched on young lady to me. Think of the old adage that tells us to look before we leap. good luck. Lindsay |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok so you gotta tell me what switched on means.... actually folks, this is coming from the male point of view....  this is one that is "just a poem" I have no confusion in my heart |
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