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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
0 posted 2007-12-14 07:35 PM

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Before my view
On leafless branches
Deflated balloons—

We’re all
Growing old


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-12-14 07:47 PM

not me!!!
All kidding aside, it's a fine mini-snapshot.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-14 10:02 PM

Well described

ARCTIC WIND
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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LA,CA
3 posted 2007-12-15 01:22 AM

believe me, it took me hours to read again and again and again  try to understand why lady Minitsun laugh. Now, I get it.
the leafless branch
the deflated balloon
and you
quite a comparison.
I shall laugh now.

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