Open Poetry #41 |
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like a damn fool (surgery) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
hey, we all have our hard luck thrillers but you listen here we've paid for our costumes and we've practiced this one for a lifetime & we told everyone we were going to be there and... you're not backing out on me this time so don't even think about it you hear me listen I don't have the time or energy for you or any of this and I could care less if you melt into a puddle of slime in the middle of the floor you better just pick up your tears and break into a somebody's singing in the rain to long song or your gonna be dirt you hear would you stop that incessant taping it's driving me up the wall sorry It's just that I've always had this dream of being a drummer and I guess I get a little carried away with things you 'member w h e n I was a 'lil kid and I used to get all excited and could one of you puff my pillow I ain't doin' that it's your turn what do I look like your... thank you... nurse it seems like just a few weeks ago that I last had surgery and look at me here I am for another go 'round are you scared of course not I'm in shock nobody's that brave 'cept John Wayne and the last I heard he wasn't lookin' so well and I remember crying when they first told me and you know I honestly don't think I ever stopped 'til they shoveled a hand full..... of pills right down my t h r o a t and whee..... led me off to surgery I think a television aired a soft forgotten faery tale some thing 'bout a never ever land...... it must have tucked itself right into my dream 'cause I can't remember a t h i n g 'bout where it was but you know faery's are like that but afterwards I cried because I thought the pain would never go away but it did and it will again you get through it you move on it could have been a lot worse you know I could have missed the past few years... hey are you all right hey t h e r e how do you feel like a fool like a damn fool . [This message has been edited by lucky (12-14-2007 02:11 PM).] |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
If I didn't know better, I'd think that surgery was like being in love! LOL... Sorry, my emotions have been a little traitorous lately and not too "patient". I am delighted with your unique way of carrying me from one thought to next, as if I were in you head and the thoughts were mine...relate all too well. ~ Karen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Even though, knowing you wrote this, and this is completely your own pain--tell me, Dale? WHY DO I WANNA HUG ROSEMARY??? (I just collapsed m'self.) I thought that I was bad patient. ![]() *wink* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...hope the surgery goes well...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I'll just say yes, you captured it pretty well... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Mom's Surgery we're all in mom's room time written: February 1982 first two people: are my little brothers arguing. third person: that's me "stop that incessant tapping" mom cuts into conversation: wants her pillow fluffed brothers; argue over who did it last nurse arrives on scene: fixes mom's pillow nurse & mom, small talk: are you scared..? mom feels no pain: whee.....led off to surgery a TV is airing a kids faerytale mom's dissertation about tears and getting through it there is actually quite a bit more of this day that I have written. I think I'm starting to understand thank you all... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Dale....You have always been able to take your feelings and make them into words just as your mind tells you of them. Pretty remarkable. I remember surgery as not being as bad as the fear I had before it. Hope all is well. ![]() |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, This was mother's second surgery for a hysterectomy. I was still pretty young then and of course after she died was when I started understanding (should I say) the "eyesight/insights" of a mother... thanks so much sis... dale |
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