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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-13 06:21 AM



and then I know the bible women shudder
to think my thinking would even enter
the hem of such a demon's dreaming

as to suggest the hell of your heaven
is the worthy trade for soul songs
of another heathen's heartland

but then again they are warm there
in their snug kneeling on soft stones
with folded hands holding in their secrets

that only tiptoe the rooms of their minds
after the altar call of solomon
when they recognize their own faces

in the scarred skin of my conjoined tattoos

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daark

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-13 11:43 AM


quote:
that only tiptoe the rooms of their minds
after the altar call of solomon
when they recognize their own faces

in the scarred skin of my conjoined tattoos




your psychological depth amazes me always, dear D.!  We all have our duality to cope with!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-12-13 03:49 PM


but then again they are warm there
in their snug kneeling on soft stones
with folded hands holding in their secrets

yes, I think everyone likes to hold in their secrets Mr Daark..  enjoyed RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-13 05:14 PM


Very well written!



ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2007-12-13 05:26 PM


ms mar, thank you for looking in this window ms

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ms R & B, thank you for the eyes ms

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thanks to you Artic one

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