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Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
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Earth

0 posted 2007-12-13 02:01 AM


Walking around, and floating mysticaly
Each drink I take, the world spins a little more
I'm in my own world, and feeling fine

Hey man, let's get high and never come down
Said the man, who's life was much like mine
Neurotic, but still sane

Life seems pointless, and full of disapointment
But we hide it all behind the smile
I long for my days to end, so when night comes
I can lay in my bed, close my eyes
And dream the night away

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

© Copyright 2007 Lincoln Deyette - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-13 12:22 PM


The extreme sadness is felt, dear Lincoln.

Every time you think you will drown in the darkness, there comes a little light from apparently nowhere to lighten your days. Trust.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-12-13 01:36 PM


"Life seems pointless, and full of disapointment"

~ But many who have experienced such a low in their life, will find that with the passing of time, something good comes along and they are happy that they were alive to experience it!

Remember the old adage, "The darkest comes before the dawn."

Whenever I am feeling low, I head outside and commune with Nature. It works wonders for me. My trials and tribulations seem rather inconsequential in the grand scheme of things.

Giving you a warm, compassionate hug,

EA

Lincoln
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Earth
3 posted 2007-12-14 02:00 AM


Thanks for the comments, much appreciated

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-14 05:41 PM


Very much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-12-19 03:22 PM


With truth we are set free to experience reality...James
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