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Abe
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since 2003-05-28
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2007-12-12 07:25 AM



THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS

Twas the night before Christmas
All alone in my bed
Where those visions of you
Danced in my head.

It was dark, it was cold
Close to midnight, about
When, I sprang from my bed
And gave out a shout.

I called out your name
To hear it's sweet sound
Knowing there'd be no answer
'Cause, you weren't around.

I tried hard to remember
The last Christmas we'd spent
Before I let you go
And my life went, hell-bent.

But, the memories are dimmed
By the blur of the drink
That I use, to forget
So I won't have to think.

'Bout the night before Christmas
All alone in my bed
But, those visions of you
Still dance, in my head.



Del "Abe" Jones
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Just another Pete
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since 2007-12-06
Posts 74
Scotland
1 posted 2007-12-12 11:11 AM


The ghosts of christmas past; it's almost as if "rest in peace" is said for the living not the dead. This is lovely, thanks for the read.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-12-12 02:58 PM


Time for some new memorys...James
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2007-12-12 08:25 PM


Some don't just move on to the next one as easily as others but maybe James is right, Abe. Good write on the subject.
                                Ida

Xillus_Xavier
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since 2007-10-05
Posts 72
Alabama
4 posted 2007-12-12 08:45 PM


Interesting twist on a classic Christmas poem...well done.
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-12 09:16 PM


Merry Christmas



ARCTIC WIND

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