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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-12 06:46 AM




I took a black stone in my hand
like at the window to heaven time
when you were salmon and tan
with your hair to the side
and orange juice in a bag
while I sipped jack dan

another window had joined me
it is hard to be faithful
when the demon takes my keys
and uses my body on others
in those lingering moments
when you have closed your eyes

I placed it on the table there
in a spill of innocent tea
and watched the ripples appear
and then the surges after
before the waterfall arrived
and capsized my infatuation

you were flying while I was wanting
_____________

daark

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1 posted 2007-12-12 08:09 AM


"it is hard to be faithful
when the demon takes my keys
and uses my body on others"

really enjoyed you here

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-12-12 03:43 PM


ms suesea, thanks hon for the touch


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-12 05:40 PM


another window had joined me
it is hard to be faithful
when the demon takes my keys
and uses my body on others
in those lingering moments
when you have closed your eyes

mmm... Mr Daark... mmm ..  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-12-13 06:12 AM


ms R & B, thanks for the mmm sounds
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