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An old post..John Lennon..
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An old post..John Lennon.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Hey John... You make it all better Your instant karma Turns my thoughts upside down... I sit and imagine A life.. so much better than this I close my eyes and let it all collide Just sing me... sing me yer blues... tonight soothe this restless soul as I continuously hit rewind Hey John... I'm floating down d o w n to Strawberry Fields Forever soaring across the universe soaking wet by standing in the english rain with my eyes closed letting it all collide so... I beg of you sing me yer blues as I continuously hit rewind... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Another Wonderful post from you!!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
very artistic, I enjoyed it... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kris, I really like this poem! You did a fine job of writing it and of presenting it. Brava!!! I was in to it from beginning to end!  Linda |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Yeah, Yeah, Yeah!! Always was and still is on of my favortie people! Great work, and thanks for the up lift! |
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