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Crystal Rain
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Crystal Rain |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Crystal Rain Burdened by heavy tears Winter encases stoic limbs in ice Making sculptures crystal, smooth and dice All around, the tinkling of unrelenting thoughts Frozen spirits chatter in the wind Better this, that will recind Elongating streams of redeeming dreams When fortitude patters on the ground Ponds of liquid glass make sound and sing Hackneyed pours sub zero sting In the gravity of cold The undoing of every once done Sparkling a biting muse before the sun Come back, warm whiles Chatter bright along too dormant smiles Bring white to powder that endears Unburdon branch of winter tears Just dust upon the season that ice clears Copyright Kkh 12/11/07 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love your beautiful Poems!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
......... [This message has been edited by Magnus (12-13-2007 07:48 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem, in its entirety, is exquisite. However, a few descriptive lines stood out for me ~ "Crystal Rain" "Frozen spirits chatter in the wind" "Ponds of liquid glass make sound and sing"  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Georgia is in a serious drought also, which will affect Florida and Alabama too...Lake Lanier here is just dry as a bone. I believe they said it was 18 feet below normal. Here it was 79 degrees today. Strange indeed. Lovely poem and I didn't mean to get away from that but I'd read Barry's reply and had to add my 2 cents in wonderful work TD, as always! I enjoyed! |
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