Three Pines - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-12-09 08:45 PM

.

Softly
So as
Not to disturb
Anyone sleeping

The snowflakes—
Fall

.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2007-12-09 09:05 PM

Blooming the purest flower
in a serene land
somewhere
in dreams

[This message has been edited by TomMark (12-11-2007 10:11 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-12-09 10:33 PM

for some reason I feel like snowflakes tonight

wonderful piece

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-10 03:09 PM

Very much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Just another Pete
Member

since 2007-12-06

Posts 74
Scotland

4 posted 2007-12-10 06:38 PM

So much said in so few words, reminded me how much I miss the snow, we hardly seem to get any here anymore. Post me a snowball as a keepsake

Pete.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-12-10 08:54 PM

"As the snow
Engulfs my hut
At dusk
My heart, too
Is completely consumed"

Applause to Master Huan Yi for this 'write!'

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-12-10 10:21 PM

~~Snowfall~~ a favorite "watch" of mine

M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2007-12-11 03:31 AM

I read this last night and believed I had commented at that time. I see I didn't so I will know. This is just lovely! Thanks for the scenery.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-12-11 08:57 AM

I followed secondhanddreampoet's link and discovered this delicate beauty that you have penned.

EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2007-12-11 03:41 PM

Nice...James

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

10 posted 2007-12-11 04:05 PM

         and for those
         not able to sleep

         the comfort
         of
         such
                g
                 e
                  n
                  t
                 l
                  e
                  n
                 e
                  s
                 s

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

11 posted 2007-12-12 09:18 PM

Thank you all

Still I wonder
what would be your response
if "Three Pines" was
a cemetery . . .

Thanks all again

John

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

12 posted 2007-12-12 11:15 PM

No difference. What are the difference among cemetery, a dream and reality in terms of "don't bother me"?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

13 posted 2007-12-15 07:31 PM

'Three Pines'...
a cemetery?!...

Only Peace
'Rests!'

(no one's
sleeping)

soft snow
falling,
shrouds all
lingering
hard-stone
traces
of lives lost
to Time’s
abandon,
yet the spirits
remain...
ever-vigilant!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.