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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2007-12-09 05:53 PM


The flowers that blume
The flowers that grow
All pritty colors
Now coverd in snow

The old brown shed
My dads spade
The wooden go kart
My freind and I made

All of the trees
And houses alike
Coverd with snow
And tiny ice spicks

So I rushed down stairs
To put on my shoes
Ruffly done up
Thers no time to lose

So I ran through the kitchin
And out of the door
Leaving my foot prints
All over the floor

What ever I did
Were ever I go
I left a small foot print
Deep in the snow

I'd go aroud
Knocking on doors
To get my friends out
We'd make snowballs galor

Our hands would get wet
And the theyd get cold
They'ed go bright red
But we wouldent be told

Wed run around shiveing
Come in my mom cryed
It was geting colder
As the the fun died

Then id go in
So cold and all wet
To the smell of hot food
And a table all set

For christmas dinner
I couldent wait
For all that food
To be put on my plate

But befor we eat
We say a prayer
For all of those
With no god out there

So we tuck in
To all those nice things
Like turky and patato
Such joy it does brings

Cos to day its his birthday
And this is forgot
For jesus our savoir
He must have loved us alot

To do what he did
Would you do the same
To clear up the world
Could you take the pain

Think of his mother
What she went through
Knowing her only son
Was dieing for you

So one christmas day
If you belive it or not
Say happy birthday jesus
That would please him alot

so he knows that we thanks him
and hell know that hes not
going to fade out
or be forgot
merry christmas to all that celibrate it and those that dont have a happy holiday

© Copyright 2007 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-09 06:20 PM


Andrew, this is really very touching and beautiful.
I love snow too and I remember doing the same things as you describe here.
Merry Christmas to you too.
I do love Jesus and He will not be forgotten, rest assured.
Let us dream of a White Christmas then ...
for some it will be reality.

Love,
Margherita

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