Open Poetry #41 |
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Morning Sunrise. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665![]() |
From your eyes the sun rose,you opened them from sleeping dreams and my heart thawed. Our first kiss in silence, then sighs as we looked towards more shared joy together, in a land of ours, where only time and our movements are of consequence. Smoothing swirling sweeps of my hands across your body. Cantillation by male Blackbird blessing dawns rise with rich sweet song echoing widely. Enfolded in embrace, hearts beating in unison, nothing said, nothing to be uttered, just eye gazing knowing, love deeply felt. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah, yes, dear Phil, what needs to be said, when Love is lived so intensely? But your poem recalling the special moment is highly appreciated, delightful. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Phil...you sure have a beautiful talent! Lovely words here... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Phil, may all your dawns rise as sweetly where nothing needs to be uttered and love is deeply felt thru' eye gazing. You are a Poet Man who truly knows the meaning of love. ![]() ![]() Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just eye gazing knowing, love deeply felt. tenderly expressed~~ loved it, Phil M |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
So very beautifully romantic. indeed slow my breath when I read it. love this one Tomtoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY BEAUTIFUL ARCTIC WIND |
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