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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2007-12-09 02:58 PM


From your eyes the
sun rose,you opened
them from sleeping dreams
and my heart thawed.
Our first kiss in silence,
then sighs as we
looked towards more shared
joy together, in a land
of ours, where only time
and our movements are of consequence.
Smoothing swirling sweeps of
my hands across your body.
Cantillation by male Blackbird
blessing dawns rise with
rich sweet song echoing widely.
Enfolded in embrace, hearts beating
in unison, nothing said, nothing
to be uttered, just eye gazing
knowing, love deeply felt.


Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

© Copyright 2007 P.D - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-09 06:13 PM


Ah, yes, dear Phil, what needs to be said, when Love is lived so intensely?

But your poem recalling the special moment is highly appreciated, delightful.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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2 posted 2007-12-10 05:14 AM


Phil...you sure have a beautiful talent! Lovely words here... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-12-10 07:20 AM


Phil, may all your dawns rise as sweetly where nothing needs to be uttered and love is deeply felt thru' eye gazing.

You are a Poet Man who truly knows the meaning of love.


Linda

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-12-10 07:22 AM


just eye gazing
knowing, love deeply felt.


tenderly expressed~~ loved it, Phil

M

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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5 posted 2007-12-10 01:15 PM


So very beautifully romantic. indeed slow my breath when I read it.

love this one

Tomtoo

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-12-10 03:36 PM


VERY BEAUTIFUL

ARCTIC WIND

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