Every Song Has Been Written

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Open Poetry #41

Every Song Has Been Written

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-12-07 06:35 PM

Every song,
Every line of each page,
Every song has been written,
In this book,
On every word you look at it
You see that each page you turn,
You know,
The song has written itself,
Every song you sing,
Every song you heard,
Into whispers
Where ocean waves calls out
into song,
Every song has been written
for you,
It is true,
That the voice of love is callin
upon this ocean,
Evey song of love is falling
upon,
Every song has been heard,
Every song has been written,
Every word you read,
In the book,
It's true,
Every line of its page,

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-12-07 07:02 PM

Vandana!

This is one of the most complete poems
I have read from you ever. Your growth
in writing is showing in this poem; the
lines are woven together well, specific
thought following form...

Well done!!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-12-08 11:26 AM

...and every word, line, and song that you ever write, is lovely, Dear Vandana! You are love personified and the object of your affection is very fortunate.

Loving hug,

Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-12-08 01:18 PM

Nice...James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-12-08 02:07 PM

This poem has a very melodic tone to it -- good job, Vandana! *smiles*.....jo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-08 05:17 PM

V-

Iliana Was right, This does have a tune to it

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-12-08 05:32 PM

You know,
The song has written itself,
Every song you sing,
Every song you heard,
Into whispers

So beautiful!

I totally agree with Karilea. This is one of your best ever. A joy to read.

Love,
Margherita

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

7 posted 2007-12-08 06:27 PM

I also like the personification, especially when it is used and produces the effects you allowed it. thanks

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2007-12-09 10:44 PM

well done!

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