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vandana
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0 posted 2007-12-07 06:35 PM



Every song,
Every line of each page,
Every song has been written,
In this book,
On every word you look at it
You see that each page you turn,
You know,
The song has written itself,
Every song you sing,
Every song you heard,
Into whispers
Where ocean waves calls out
into song,
Every song has been written
for you,
It is true,
That the voice of love is callin
upon this ocean,
Evey song of love is falling
upon,
Every song has been heard,
Every song has been written,
Every word you read,
In the book,
It's true,
Every line of its page,


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-12-07 07:02 PM


Vandana!

This is one of the most complete poems
I have read from you ever. Your growth
in writing is showing in this poem; the
lines are woven together well, specific
thought following form...

Well done!!


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-12-08 11:26 AM


...and every word, line, and song that you ever write, is lovely, Dear Vandana! You are love personified and the object of your affection is very fortunate.

Loving hug,

Linda

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-12-08 01:18 PM


Nice...James
iliana
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4 posted 2007-12-08 02:07 PM


This poem has a very melodic tone  to it -- good job, Vandana!  *smiles*.....jo
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-12-08 05:17 PM


V-

Iliana Was right, This does have a tune to it



ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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6 posted 2007-12-08 05:32 PM


You know,
The song has written itself,
Every song you sing,
Every song you heard,
Into whispers


So beautiful!

I totally agree with Karilea. This is one of your best ever. A joy to read.

Love,
Margherita


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7 posted 2007-12-08 06:27 PM


I also like the personification, especially when it is used and produces the effects you allowed it.  thanks
passing shadows
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8 posted 2007-12-09 10:44 PM


well done!
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