winter fawn of christmas snow

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2007-12-07 08:42 AM

winter fawn of christmas snow

tranquil hush of melody
alyssum mist effaced
in stroll
like a
monolithic intellectual design
of quiet laced variant shapes
christmas snow
      in Morse code
focusing little skill
from earth's bountiful
yuletide solemnity
wherein
that I might best know
the heaviness of faith
and its whimsical beauty

storm of serendipity
could reckon a genus
of white mollusks
caressing my face and nose
like a grammatical slang of artic
blasting frozen
benevolence
to the senses
off moons of Jupiter

aye,
a cooing gentleness of seedlings
siren quiet, plows enchanting
meanings
to winter white and
voice tress hearthstones

hugs my soul

nightglow's witchcraft
embraces liaison

benchmarks of warmth
tranquil
aardvarks of mistletoe

enchanting wizard

chablis nymphs

a winter fawn

       of Christmas snow

remember this daughter well....

                a mother's love

    to son's of life....

and Christmas snow

I want to embrace

    a winter white

and song of yuletide verse of glow

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (12-07-2007 09:22 AM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-12-07 09:01 AM

Lee! Well it was about time you came back to the family fold! Gosh, I sure have been missing your poetry ~ and YOU!

My goodness! Whenever I go to write a reply to a poem of yours, I am in a quandary as to which lines to quote as my favourites. Well, after due consideration, these are the ones I selected:

"earth's bountiful
yuletide solemnity
wherein
that I might best know
the heaviness of faith
and its whimsical beauty"

Thank you for this gift of your poetic beauty, this (almost) winter's day!

Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-12-07 09:08 AM

You work in words as the artist works in deep oils and color pallets.
Couldn't find just one favorite line.
Nice to read you again lady!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2007-12-07 09:24 AM

Of course I always love all of yours....but in this, my favorite lines...

"I remember this daughter well....

and a mother's love

to son's of life....

and Christmas snow

a winter white"

As usual...

jimmy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-07 11:14 AM

lEEj

wow, do i see my name ARCTIC ?

LOL

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-12-07 11:35 AM

aye,
a cooing gentleness of seedlings
siren quiet, plows enchanting
meanings
to winter white and
voice tress hearthstones

hugs my soul

nightglow's witchcraft
embraces liaison

there is such a special glow to your words, dear LeeJ, it does bring in the atmosphere of winter and Christmas indeed.

Excellent!

love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-12-07 02:49 PM

LeeJ it is so good to read your words again here, you have been missed m'friend....and gosh, this is beautiful it is....LOVED it.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-12-07 03:19 PM

Enjoyed...James

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