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Morning Smile
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Morning Smile |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Like the daylight that creeps in low, slowly over the horizon at dawn you peek into the newness of day, bringing with you along the way a fresh breathe of air ~caught somewhere~ between reflections of thoughts and the warmth that is brought along with a realization, in knowing, there is no denial You will always be my morning smile. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Kathleen.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
That is exactly how I feel about the pumpkin muffin I just ate! Hey! It was total enjoyment! Very emotive, personal glimpse into your person Donna...."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Interloper, I am glad that you enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
pumpkin muffin.....  Have any extra's?? Thanks for taking a glimpse Susan. Hugs. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
And you, Gentle One, made my morning smile. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this is a very attractive morning smile! Beautifully expressed, dear Donna. Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was beautiful, my friend...loved the transition between first and second stanzas... jimmy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Donna. Am I my usual very intuitive self when I suspect that something has changed significantly (for the better) in your life. (and portait) Hope so..... Ida |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, I'm so glad that it brought you a smile. Hugs hon. Margherita, sweetie, thank you for stopping by Awww Jimmy, thanks so much, I do appreciate you m'friend.  Ida, I appreciate that sentiment, I do. This is actually just an old pip pic I decided to pop back in. Thanks. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i liked the transition also...the love you have is definetly noticed and shared |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DI, thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. Smiles are priceless dontcha think?  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
hmmm...second read was even prettier... heart to you... jimmy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
awww Jimmy, you have blessed me twice. Heart to you too my friend. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah how lovely is this! RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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