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Veering Wind.
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Veering Wind. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Lulled quietude, except for sudden bursting gusts, rustling in trees like frightened animals fleeing. Mizzle slanting in slow motion serous, velocious oil slick clouds polluting cobalt skies. Rusty steel redolence flaring nostrils, triggering memories. Distant silhouettes of tall trees,rising like permanent shadows. Fitful moods grip us in our mutable minds, incubating ourselves for an algid unamed threat. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Thus is a beautiful poem. I read "fear" in it which is in generally not in your poems. love the read. Tom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Phil, the threat is felt, your words have great impact. It's as if we could not breathe deeply in the scenery you painted, thus the grip of fear. Pollution's effects described powerfully. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
velocious oil slick clouds polluting cobalt skies... mans destruction killing nature, tainting what is innocent, destroying lives... You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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