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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-07-26 10:35 AM

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Water glistens on leaves
That bend in the wind
After a summer rain

No sun in the sky
Visible hidden from view
Behind lead gray clouds

There is a somber
Mood to the air
Wet with a song
That no bird sings

So one goes alone
Into that morning world
Sustained as he is

By who’s yet behind
His own eyes


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
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1 posted 2007-07-26 04:31 PM

Very good. It sets a very clear somber mood.
Hyaunt
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since 2007-07-12
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2 posted 2007-07-26 05:49 PM

nice!

Hyaunt
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3 posted 2007-07-26 09:40 PM

another beauty
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