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My Love |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Emma Where am I now where will I go, I dont think that I will ever show, How much I did love you in all due degree, And if I did show you I hope that you would see, I loved your eyes and the way that you smile, And when ever you did I turn to a pile, Of shivering nervers that shake like a leaf, And when you are sad my mind gives me grief, How to make you happy and smile again, If I can't do it I feel so ashamed, But now all I see is deceit in your heart, When I saw you with him it tore me apart, I get so mad when I hear our song, What you were doing was moraly wrong, You ruined my life back then at the start, And now thats all left is a small piece of heart, I'll never forget how you looked at me that way, I'll never foget those words you always did say, How ever untrue they turned you to be, You will always be that bit special to me, So thanks for the good and the bad I do sigh, I'll see you for now, from me a goodbye. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As hard as it is, a part of love is not to hold on, for with strong attachments can come pain...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Andrew, yes this hurts, but as you reason you gain insight and you see that whatever comes to us, good and bad, has a reason to be ... we learn, we move on, we love, even if in pain. James' comment is very wise! Powerful write. Love, Margherita  |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
I was realy moved by this poem, very nice, i can relate. |
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