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Father Of The Wind
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Father Of The Wind |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Father Of The Wind By Paul Wilson Speak to me father of the wind from beyond the valley of kings Bring to me that which I desire more than life… on Pegasus wings Calm the turmoil within my soul remove doubt from my empty heart Let me share today with all those I love… for soon I will depart Blinding light coming from the West holds me on the edge of today Scatter my ashes on the winds for all eternity I pray I’m just a fading memory of loved one’s that no longer care Light my pathway with stars of hope to journey’s end I won’t despair River of life wash away sins father of the wind where are you On rock of salvation I stand waiting for my life to be through Look past the mountains and stars to valley of kings where I reside Grains of sand mark moments in time left behind for today I died ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-26-2007 09:59 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ This piece is absolutely G O R G E O U S~ Poignantly moving and just beautiful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Paul the Poet ~ Grace-full writing at its finest!  My eyes are brimming from this deeply emotional spill from your heart. Love to you, Linda |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Calm the turmoil within my soul remove doubt from my empty heart Let me share today with all those I love… for soon I will depart Blinding light coming from the West holds me on the edge of today Scatter my ashes on the winds for all eternity I pray" excellent writting!!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The all of this is so very beautiful Paul. Oh this whispers softly to me~ Very nicely done, poet friend. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Those are pretty strong words from such a great poet as you and I really appreciate them very much. Thanks...Paul Linda...You dear lady bring a big smile to my face with your graceful reply. I am in awe thinking that you cared for this that much. ...PaulSEA...Wow...To have someone quote me is overwelming. Your reply is very very much appreciated...Paul Donna...Glad this poem whispers to you in a gentle way. Thank you for your tender reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Strong, powerful write... Inspirational read. MoonShadow . |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Thanks...Paul MoonShadow...Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for your reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Paul  you have gotten some inspiration lately! I love it! a very profound, beautiful but sad write |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very strong and personal write, thanx for sharing it with us all. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Thanks, Trying to get back on track with my passion. Glad you liked this...Paul Barry...Thank you for your reply. Glad to share with all...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"I’m just a fading memory of loved one’s that no longer care Light my pathway with stars of hope to journey’s end I won’t despair" It breaks my heart to read you have this feeling. My prayer is the circumstance that led to this write will change soon. bless you, latearrival. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Whoops! a hiccup |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
latearrival...Thanks so much for caring. That stanza is my favorite even thou it is very sad it is true. Thanks for understanding and for your prayers...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The command and strength of this piece is absolutley awesome. Patricia |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Patricia...Thanks for your wonderful reply. I really appreciate it...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
THIS is fine...really, REALLY fine!!! serious, long-sustained applause! [a poetic 'standing ovation'!!] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
This touches my heart and brings tears to my eyes~ My spirit will rise |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
secondhanddreampoet...Thanks for the applause. Your reply is overwelming. Thanks very much...Paul MGROVES...So glad you took time to read and reply, I appreciate it very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
A beautiful requiem, Paul. Something that I needed today. Thank you. Lady Élan ~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Elan...Thanks for your kind words. Take care...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 *~coco~* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent, my friend. As always... JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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