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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2007-12-01 08:02 AM



The fluff ball

There it stands so cute and small
There is nothing vicious about him at all
But you know just like the rest
He'll be a sentry dog one of the best
But at fisrt hes tiny not very calm
How could this fluff ball do any one harm?
His tiny teeth are like razor sharp spikes
but then again hes only a tyke
He woulld have been a gift for him or her
With his soft black and brown fur
But this one is special he'll have a job
But just this moment hes a playful sod
Whit his yapping somtimes untrue
Knowing one day hes going to help you
As he gets older his training will start
And all of his courage will build in his heart
The power he needs to get the job done
He's not scared of knives or the loud bang of a gun
He's getting bigger every day
And all he does is want to play
He is trained to obay his masteres commands
He has no problem attacking a man
Apart from his owner who's his best freind
Which he will never leave he will always deffend
The fluff ball know his duty he knows it his job
His masters in charge to fluff ball hes god
So now that he's grown and so has his hair
His master knows that he'll all ways be there
Whether his master is indoors or out side
The fluff ball will stand with courage and pride
He'll all ways go first with out whimper of frown
He's so big he can take any man to the ground
Whether the man has a knife or a gun
The fluff ball will get the job done
But one of these day he will have to stop
He will go live with a retired solider or cop
But his good master will visit a while
When fluff balls sees him he'll simply go wild
But there will come a day when the fluff ball will die
And his loving master will try not to cry
The fluffbal lays there all grown up and strong
In his masters heart he'll all ways belong



© Copyright 2007 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2007-12-01 01:14 PM


Enjoyed this dear Andrew, even with the sad ending. The separation from a pet is a tough pain to endure, for both parts involved.
Your tribute to this fluff ball is very beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-12-01 02:20 PM


Very nice writing...James
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-12-01 02:25 PM


Very much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England
4 posted 2007-12-01 03:30 PM


Thanks to you all for your words. fluff ball was a british army centry dog based in dover and he had traveld a bit he part of a protection and deterent group that was the to discouage and catch intruders on british bases
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