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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2007-11-30 06:36 AM


sometimes it is the drive
the long ones that are lovely
when you can't do anything else
but think about other things

and your mind takes me down
from the dusty place there
and rubs me the right way
and puts me between heaven

and your breast friends
for just a few minutes usually
but long enough for your heart
to find how I fit like a glove

with the fingers wrapped around
and tucked under your fragile edges
when you are a dove with folded wings
looking at the side views of evening

knowing your love is safe in my ocean


_____________

daark

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2007-11-30 08:53 AM


That sigh you just heard in your ear was me whispering...Lovely D....absolutely lovely....*skotc*   What a beautiful ocean to be lost in...  
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-11-30 12:33 PM


I love those drives that allow such intriguing beautiful thoughts to develop ...

And I love every single line you created here, dear D. POET.

Love,
Margherita

vandana
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3 posted 2007-11-30 12:42 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-11-30 03:11 PM


Nice...James
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-11-30 04:56 PM


ms gs, thanks lady friend

__________
ms mar, thank you for taking me along
on your drive here

___________

ms van, thank you for the read and touch

______________

james, thank you sir

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