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One by one they fall
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One by one they fall |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
One by one they fall down to the lake of lonely, one tear, another, and there is a stream that follows on to somewhere I can’t reach; will it find some wider ocean, you on the other side? It flows; will I never be empty? Kaz |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You...are like a ghost from the mist! The last time....you left us 'doors'.... This 'one' is so poignant, like the cry of a loon. |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
It was a better time for me then, that is a surety. I'm glad someone remembered! Kaz |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
I really feel for sorrow. For I am a tributary to yhe ocean also. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I click on a name I haven't seen in far too long... and immediately remember why I missed your words so much! Even if I'd never shed a tear... or wondered if they'd ever stop leaking... I'd be touched by the picture of loneliness you paint so poignantly. This is magnificent! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I agree with the others this is a perfect picture of sorrow. tears will one day stop though happiness seems gone away tomorrow brings joy Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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