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Dream Man
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Dream Man |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
For most of my life I've wondered when I'd meet the man of my dreams The man who would some day would sweep me off my feet Someone who could make me smile with out even trying A man who would love me for who I am, flaws and all Someone I could count on in my time of need And who would not hesitate to hold my hand and take a leap A man who believes in me as much as he believes in us Never afraid of what the future holds as long as we go though it together Someone who knows, the greatest thing in life is to find the person you are destine to be with |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've wondered the same thing no answer yet |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A man who believes in me as much as he believes in us~~ a good line, Danielle M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Danielle, man or woman, we all still seek, living through this life as we can, with the possibility of never having that meeting, love is a gift that only few can put claim to I'm afraid. We shall all search together my friend, goodluck. Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Have had similar thoughts about meeting my dream woman...and I thought that I met her..but she was my dream woman but I was not her dream man... I think the important thing is to fully enjoy the relationship we are in...whether it be a friendship or more...and that prepares us for the dream one...after all if we think along the line that it must be the dream one or nothing, our whole life might pass us by with nothing...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Danielle - I can understand this write and would add that I think James has given some wise advice. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your Dream Man be manifested into reality.  In my life, if I go actively looking for things ~ they're elusive. However, when I put those things (and men! lol) on the back burner of my mind, they will suddenly appear out of the clear blue sky! ~ and that can be heavenly! I could feel the emotion behind your expressive words.  EA |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"the greatest thing in life is to find the person you are destined to be with" Often times a lesson learned too late in life... after Mundania has attached the traces that ensnare, entangle and bind until all that remains is an elusive dream. Interesting write. MoonShadow . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Odds of finding Mr. Right are about as slim as finding Mrs. Right. If two people can communicate, can respect each other and live together in such a way that they are not at odds with each other....they are gettting close...Maturity has a lot to do with it all. That and the ability to forgive when a mistake is made. |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
The problem with getting swept off your feet is that you often end up on your rear end. On a format note, you might want to consider breaking up the lines in this piece since some of them are rather long. Best of luck with the search. |
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