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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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0 posted 2007-11-27 01:04 PM


Hello,
I'm writing this to you
As all the words are in the air;
There's been no chance to prove them true,
And in the wave of my despair
I've nothing else to do.

The breath of wind will dry my tears,
The wind of change... but love's eternal,
And with those tears it won't fade,
I'll die - the flame of love will burn
And dwell here till the end of days.

And every time I see your eyes
In my own world behind my lashes,
The stars in our evening sky
Seem bleak... and from tomorrow's ashes
My hope revives.

My love, you never broke my heart,
As it was simply never whole.
You've just picked up its every shard;
Without knowing, you have stolen
Them all... It's fate, it's not your fault.

And, as you keep it in your hands,
It's drenched in all of your misfortunes.
To see your pain I just can't stand,
Each of your tears is a torture...
So give it all to me.
We will withstand.

Please, talk to me, please, let me hear
Your voice, and tell me what to do
To let you know I'm always here,
To ease the pain you're going through.

With love,
I won't sign my letter.
I am the one... you know who.
The day... It doesn't even matter -
It's one more day without you.

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-11-27 02:32 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
A Beautiful Disaster
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2 posted 2007-11-30 04:08 AM


Thank you =)
Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2007-12-01 11:14 PM


What a beautiful and poignant letter, and the broadcast of your query through the vastness of cyberspace will surely find a heart in which it can germinate and grow.rit, Spirit, Spirit,
come to me tonight.
Cross the mountains and the oceans.
Be hasty in your flight.
And clothe yourself in fleshly form,
blood of my blood,
heart of my heart,
that I may be a part of you,
that you may be a part of me.
Sprit, Spirit,
Spirit of the night.
Clothe yourself in flesh.
Come to me;
please come to me,
tonight?

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2007-12-02 03:12 PM


Oh..so much of this I've felt in my "younger" (not like I'm OLD or anything...!) years!!

Such passion straight from your heart in this 'letter'..felt this all the way through!

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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