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Open Poetry #41

Have You Known?

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-11-27 01:03 PM

You still can hear me breathing,
But have you ever thought
That I'm holding my breath just for you?

You still can see my heart bleeding,
But have you ever known
That it's pierced by the sword, meant for you?

Don't turn away, having asked me
If I love life more than you.
Sure I'll say that I do.
Have you known
You and my life are the same?
You're my life and the one who has saved it,
You're the strength,
Flowing to my heart through my veins.

If only I were a gentle wind
To touch your face,
To dry your tears,
To chase your sorrows away,
To let you feel me,
Calming you down...
And you'd know
I'll come back now and then...

Have you ever known
I'll be everything for you?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-11-28 04:37 AM

Some wonderful lines in this poem...
For example, "If only I were a gentle wind, to touch your face, to dry yours tears, to let you feel me." to name a few...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-11-28 05:22 PM

I agree with JamesMichael

ARCTIC WIND

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

3 posted 2007-11-28 08:03 PM

Nice read.
You write with your heart. Nice

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

4 posted 2007-11-30 04:06 AM

Aww thank you all!

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