Open Poetry #41 |
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Goodbye, old number one........regurgitated |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA ![]() |
I was tiptoing back through the archives and came across this one, which brought back some nice memories. We were all aghast to discover uponlog-in that day that Open forum #1 was closed and were were now at Forum #2! Many of us didn't even know that there would be anything other than only one forum.Today, and over forty forums and eight years later,here we are. Hats off to you all. Here's the link to the original if you want to read some fun replies... /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=18&topic=000031 They say that Open 1 is gone. How foolish can they be? For every word on every page Is here in front of me. Although the pages are not there For me to really see Their words will live forevermore Within my memory. Look! Right here! Page eleven That's where my entrance began A rescue from obscurity By the ever-seeking Nan. Responses that were given me Gave me a sense of pride. They opened up their friendly door And welcomed me inside. Page 32...the poems we wrote For Independence Day, Displaying love of country In a beautiful array. Now here's a poem that made me laugh And that one made me cry. I tried to answer every one With some sincere reply. And look how we replied! We shot our poems back and forth! On fellowship we shared in here I cannot place a worth. Page 62 is special. It's Our first Community Poem, A valiant joint endeavor By the folks who call this home. Here's PoetWheel coming by To see us his first time. He cracked us up and teased us with The way he wrote his rhyme. You can trace a poet's progress From his first time posted rhyme And watch as he matured and grew Up to the present time. A poet's life could be displayed For everyone to see. Let's take, in point, the simple case Of sea of OKC. Now sea, he posted poems of love And Lady sea did, too. After a while, our buddy, sea Just disappeared from view. Then Lady sea came back and posted sea's old poems, alone. All in a row, she posted them (With comments of her own). The sea of OKC came back And posted on his own Some poems of loss and emptiness And being on his own. So she was here and he was here, Then they fell out of touch. The she came back - then he came back.. This place is just too much!!! We got to know our poets well. We got to know them through Emotions and experiences That they put in full view. We sympathized with failing health, With lives that had gone wrong, And, through our words of caring, we Helped make each other strong. Toerag showed up on #83 With Suthern right along. Not far behind was Lorelei Along with her Long John. So many poets came and went. So many poets stayed. So many voices formed a wonderous Passionate parade. And now Book one is history. It's faded now from view. We find that we have moved along To Open number two. But memories it left behind And friendships that it made Will rest so deeply in our minds That they will never fade. So...out with the old - in with the new Is the song we now must sing. There was so much fun with number one Let's see what two will bring!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whudathunkit? geez, time has passed so fast thanks for the memories Mike |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mikie! That was before my time but fun to read. Thanks. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Excellent writing~~ I enjoyed it very much~~ ![]() M |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
This brought back some memories Michael almost all of them good (there was that Toe bloke after all). ![]() I believe I joined the same week you did, under another name of course, which is probably why my memories run fairly close to your own regarding the site at that time. The place has certainly got busy hasn’t it? I was trying to work out the other day if it’s actually got better at the same time, I tend to believe it has or at the very least it’s managed not to lose the appeal it had as it grew. Hopefully I’ll be saying the same thing in a reply eight years from now and hopefully you’ll still be around posting great poems for me to reply on. (Better make it four, just in case, neither of us is getting any younger) ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wonderful Michael! There are some gems in the archives here, and I for one wish I had more time to get in there. One thing about this site, the more things change, the more it stays the same. ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Boy, oh boy... does this ever bring back memories! *S* And reading the responses on the original was bittersweet... I laughed again over the great TP dispute... and cried a bit just seeing Becky's name. Back then, I thought we were family... now, I know we are. *S* I do hope that Ron has bronzed page 83??? LOL It was, after all, a turning point for the sanity of PIP... or lack thereof? LOL Thanks for this trip down memory lane, Deer One... *smooch* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
My memories of poets dear Don't go as far as yours But once in a while I take a trip To the archives smallest stores Reading all that was ever written Would take me several years But I just know that when I do I would loose my voice from all the cheers Thanks Deer, for your sweet words and thanks Ron for setting up this library of poetic gems. I'm proud to be a part of this family. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
![]() I'd like to write a poem with you... even if only for the archives. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know what prompted me to find a river in the sea, one of poetic verse so fine that I thought it, "mine, all mine"... then I saw the river swell, as if one was clanging a bell poets came from near and far, to hang their words upon a star... a home to some, a place so caring, one's refuge became another's daring and camped upon these shores so fine was a river made of poet's wine... encapsulated, engrossed, so enchanted was I... that still I linger, if only to sigh. ![]() |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
I must admit that I haven't visited here in a while, and I do mean a while. As always you have enlighten me and all with this wonderful journey back down memory lane. As one of my favorite poets here, you haven't failed me yet. You've always had a unique way of putting pen to paper and making us laugh, cry, think, or just reminisce as you've done with this posting. Thank you for the walk memory lane, I got to look at the beauty that was almost forgotten. Garfield |
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